Module: kamailio Branch: master Commit: 91c5626d7119cd9c78028d9b3bf968ecd7db5952 URL: https://github.com/kamailio/kamailio/commit/91c5626d7119cd9c78028d9b3bf968ec...
Author: mojtaba mespio@gmail.com Committer: mojtaba mespio@gmail.com Date: 2021-03-17T12:49:04+03:30
lrkproxy: update doc/ folder for README
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Modified: src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml
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Diff: https://github.com/kamailio/kamailio/commit/91c5626d7119cd9c78028d9b3bf968ec... Patch: https://github.com/kamailio/kamailio/commit/91c5626d7119cd9c78028d9b3bf968ec...
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diff --git a/src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml b/src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml index 57cc2faab3..1f9eacc534 100644 --- a/src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml +++ b/src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml @@ -17,14 +17,16 @@ <section> <title>Overview</title> <para> - This is a module that enables media streams to be relayed via an - lrkproxy. This module works with py_lrkproxy engine in: + This is a module that enables media streams to be relayed via + pylrkproxy engine that exist in: https://github.com/mojtabaesfandiari/pylrkproxy - This module does relaying audio streams between peers in + It does relaying audio streams between peers in PREROUTING netfilter-hooking section in kernel-space linux. The LRKProxy architecture is composed of two different layers. These layers are independent of each other. + For more information about LRKProxy architecture, please visit our paper in ieeexplore: + https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/9303608 </para> </section>
@@ -33,12 +35,12 @@ <section> <title>LRKP_Controlling Layer (LRKP_CL)</title> <para> - The first layer is developed as User-Space + The first layer develope as User-Space application that allows User-Space to directly access and manipulate cache data buffer and packet buffer in Kernel-Space. This layer gets all information about creating new sessions, - active sessions and tear-down sessions which is + active sessions and teardown sessions which is gotten from SDP body during signaling plan and relay them to the LRKP-Transport Stateful Layer (LRKP- TSL). @@ -47,7 +49,7 @@ <section> <title>LRKP_Transport Stateful Layer (LRKP_TSL)</title> <para> - The second layer is developed in Kernel-Space as + The second layer develope in Kernel-Space as a main decision point for RTP admission controller and Quickpath selector to where a received packet should be forwarded with power of packet mangling
Hello,
this commit seems to introduce some English language mistakes, actually replacing what was good English (in my opinion) - see comments inline:
On 17.03.21 10:19, mojtaba wrote:
Module: kamailio Branch: master Commit: 91c5626d7119cd9c78028d9b3bf968ecd7db5952 URL: https://github.com/kamailio/kamailio/commit/91c5626d7119cd9c78028d9b3bf968ec...
Author: mojtaba mespio@gmail.com Committer: mojtaba mespio@gmail.com Date: 2021-03-17T12:49:04+03:30
lrkproxy: update doc/ folder for README
Modified: src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml
Diff: https://github.com/kamailio/kamailio/commit/91c5626d7119cd9c78028d9b3bf968ec... Patch: https://github.com/kamailio/kamailio/commit/91c5626d7119cd9c78028d9b3bf968ec...
diff --git a/src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml b/src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml index 57cc2faab3..1f9eacc534 100644 --- a/src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml +++ b/src/modules/lrkproxy/doc/lrkproxy_admin.xml [...]
@@ -33,12 +35,12 @@
<section> <title>LRKP_Controlling Layer (LRKP_CL)</title> <para> - The first layer is developed as User-Space + The first layer develope as User-Space
You replaced "is developed" with "develope", which is not a valid English word.
application that allows User-Space to directly access and manipulate cache data buffer and packet buffer in Kernel-Space. This layer gets all information about creating new sessions,
active sessions and tear-down sessions which is
active sessions and teardown sessions which is gotten from SDP body during signaling plan and relay them to the LRKP-Transport Stateful Layer (LRKP- TSL).
@@ -47,7 +49,7 @@
<section> <title>LRKP_Transport Stateful Layer (LRKP_TSL)</title> <para> - The second layer is developed in Kernel-Space as + The second layer develope in Kernel-Space as
You replaced again "is developed" with "develope", which is not a valid English word.
Cheers, Daniel