[sr-dev] git:master: corex: minor documentation edits

[Olle E. Johansson]

Module: sip-router
Branch: master
Commit: 287c02de1491019fbf085742b82fc7040ea72886
URL:    http://git.sip-router.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi/sip-router/?a=commit;h=287c02de1491019fbf085742b82fc7040ea72886

Author: Olle E. Johansson <oej at edvina.net>
Committer: Olle E. Johansson <oej at edvina.net>
Date:   Mon Dec  3 08:01:06 2012 +0100

corex: minor documentation edits

---

 modules/corex/README              |   26 +++++++++++++-------------
 modules/corex/doc/corex_admin.xml |   14 +++++++-------
 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/modules/corex/README b/modules/corex/README
index 402089a..ecceeaf 100644
--- a/modules/corex/README
+++ b/modules/corex/README
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Daniel-Constantin Mierla
 
    <miconda at gmail.com>
 
-   Copyright © 2012 asipto.com
+   Copyright © 2012 asipto.com
      __________________________________________________________________
 
    Table of Contents
@@ -71,16 +71,16 @@ Chapter 1. Admin Guide
 
 1. Overview
 
-   This module provides reimplementation of very old functions that were
-   in core and supported only static string or integer parameters. The new
-   versions bring support for dynamic parameters (allowing variables
-   inside the parameters).
+   This module provides reimplementation of a few very old functions that
+   used to be in the core and supported only static string or integer
+   parameters. The new versions bring support for dynamic parameters
+   (allowing variables inside the parameters).
 
    There are also brand new features, related to core internals, but
    controlled from configuration file or via control interfaces.
 
-   Contributions to this module must be done under BSD license, to follow
-   the requirements of the core contributions.
+   Contributions to this module must be done under the BSD license, to
+   follow the requirements of the core contributions.
 
 2. Dependencies
 
@@ -104,12 +104,12 @@ Chapter 1. Admin Guide
 
 3.1. alias_subdomains (string)
 
-   Register a domain and all its sub-domains to match the myself
+   Register a domain and all its sub-domains to match the "myself"
    condition. It can be set many times. Its full format is:
    'proto:domain:port', allowing to set restrictions on protocol and port
    as well. Protocol and port are optional.
 
-   Default value is “NULL”.
+   Default value is "NULL".
 
    Example 1.1. Set alias_subdomains parameter
 ...
@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ modparam("corex", "alias_subdomains", "udp:sip-router.org:5060")
 
 4.1.  append_branch([ uri, [ q ] ])
 
-   Append a new branch to the destination set, useful to build the
-   addresses for parallel forking or redirect replies.
+   Append a new branch to the destination set, useful to build the set of
+   destination addresses for parallel forking or redirect replies.
 
    Both parameters are optional, If no uri parameter is provided, then the
-   address from request URI (r-uri) is taken to build the new branch.
+   address from request URI (r-uri) is used to build the new branch.
 
    Meaning of the parameters is as follows:
      * uri - SIP address of the branch to be used as R-URI in the outgoing
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ modparam("corex", "alias_subdomains", "udp:sip-router.org:5060")
 
 5.2.  corex.list_aliases
 
-   Print the list of hostname aliases used to match myself condition.
+   Print the list of hostname aliases used to match the myself condition.
 
    Example:
                 sercmd corex.list_aliases
diff --git a/modules/corex/doc/corex_admin.xml b/modules/corex/doc/corex_admin.xml
index 5dd72e7..3291cfd 100644
--- a/modules/corex/doc/corex_admin.xml
+++ b/modules/corex/doc/corex_admin.xml
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
 	<section>
 	<title>Overview</title>
 	<para>
-		This module provides reimplementation of very old functions that
-		were in core and supported only static string or integer parameters.
+		This module provides reimplementation of a few very old functions that
+		used to be in the core and supported only static string or integer parameters.
 		The new versions bring support for dynamic parameters (allowing
 		variables inside the parameters).
 	</para>
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 		controlled from configuration file or via control interfaces.
 	</para>
 	<para>
-		Contributions to this module must be done under BSD license, to
+		Contributions to this module must be done under the BSD license, to
 		follow the requirements of the core contributions.
 	</para>
 	</section>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
 	<section>
 	    <title><varname>alias_subdomains</varname> (string)</title>
 	    <para>
-		Register a domain and all its sub-domains to match the myself
+		Register a domain and all its sub-domains to match the <quote>myself</quote>
 		condition. It can be set many times. Its full format is:
 		'proto:domain:port', allowing to set restrictions on protocol
 		and port as well. Protocol and port are optional.
@@ -97,11 +97,11 @@ modparam("corex", "alias_subdomains", "udp:sip-router.org:5060")
 	    </title>
 	    <para>
 			Append a new branch to the destination set, useful to build the
-			addresses for parallel forking or redirect replies.
+			set of destination addresses for parallel forking or redirect replies.
 		</para>
 		<para>
 			Both parameters are optional, If no uri parameter is provided,
-			then the address from request URI (r-uri) is taken to build the
+			then the address from request URI (r-uri) is used to build the
 			new branch.
 		</para>
 		<para>Meaning of the parameters is as follows:</para>
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ modparam("corex", "alias_subdomains", "udp:sip-router.org:5060")
 		<function moreinfo="none">corex.list_aliases</function>
 		</title>
 		<para>
-			Print the list of hostname aliases used to match myself
+			Print the list of hostname aliases used to match the myself
 			condition.
 		</para>
 		<para>