[sr-dev] git:master: mqueue: minor edits to README

[Olle E. Johansson]

Module: sip-router
Branch: master
Commit: c29773967e83c4b3977b76a43805dd622bc018a9
URL:    http://git.sip-router.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi/sip-router/?a=commit;h=c29773967e83c4b3977b76a43805dd622bc018a9

Author: Olle E. Johansson <oej at edvina.net>
Committer: Olle E. Johansson <oej at edvina.net>
Date:   Mon Dec  3 08:06:27 2012 +0100

mqueue: minor edits to README

---

 modules/mqueue/doc/mqueue_admin.xml |   17 +++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/modules/mqueue/doc/mqueue_admin.xml b/modules/mqueue/doc/mqueue_admin.xml
index 3a6ce9e..a444cc4 100644
--- a/modules/mqueue/doc/mqueue_admin.xml
+++ b/modules/mqueue/doc/mqueue_admin.xml
@@ -17,13 +17,14 @@
     <section>
 	<title>Overview</title>
 	<para>
-		This module offers generic message queue system in shared memory for
-		inter-process communication via config file. One example of usage is
-		to send time consuming operations to a timer process that consumes
-		items in the queue, without affecting SIP message handling.
+		The mqueue module offers a generic message queue system in shared memory for
+		inter-process communication using the config file. One example of usage is
+		to send time consuming operations to one or several timer processes that consumes
+		items in the queue, without affecting SIP message handling in the socket-listening 
+		process.
 	</para>
 	<para>
-		There can be defined many queues, access to values being done via
+		There can be many defined queues. Access to queued values is done via
 		pseudo variables.
 	</para>
     </section>
@@ -63,7 +64,7 @@
 	<section>
 	    <title><varname>mqueue</varname> (string)</title>
 	    <para>
-		Definition of memory queue
+		Definition of a memory queue
 	    </para>
 	    <para>
 		<emphasis>
@@ -77,7 +78,7 @@
 		oldest one is removed.
 	    </para>
 		<para>
-		The parameter can be set many time, each holding the definition of one
+		The parameter can be set many times, each holding the definition of one
 		queue.
 	    </para>
 	    <example>
@@ -144,7 +145,7 @@ while(mq_fetch("myq"))
 	    </title>
 	    <para>
 		Free the item fetched in pseudo-variables. It is optional, a new fetch
-		frees the old values.
+		frees the previous values.
 	    </para>
 		<example>
 		<title><function>mq_pv_free</function> usage</title>